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Nick Buchheit's avatar

Nice little story, Shoni. I’m not sure I could be as brave as Estelle but I really enjoyed the moments with the shark. You you also had a nice build up in the story to the moment.

CB Mason | YA Dystopian+Sci-Fi's avatar

Shoni! Wow! What a powerful story. (And replete with ‘surface’ tension. I love how that evaporates below the surface.)

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