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Evelyn K. Brunswick's avatar

This is great character building. And the suggestive ship descriptions, without saying too much. And the emotional side of impending fiery doom. As I say, it's great writing.

And I love the way you end your chapters on a 'I must find out what happens next' line...

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Shoni's avatar

Thanks Evelyn! I've tried to raise the stakes since the last draft. Glad it's working!

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