This is great character building. And the suggestive ship descriptions, without saying too much. And the emotional side of impending fiery doom. As I say, it's great writing.
And I love the way you end your chapters on a 'I must find out what happens next' line...
This is great character building. And the suggestive ship descriptions, without saying too much. And the emotional side of impending fiery doom. As I say, it's great writing.
And I love the way you end your chapters on a 'I must find out what happens next' line...
Thanks Evelyn! I've tried to raise the stakes since the last draft. Glad it's working!